Writing Feedback / boom Internet - people use the Internet more and more [2]

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nowdays, the more develop the more people use internet.Bom internet rapidly of the people use internet in one nation,area or around the word. internet is very comon, it can be use by student, business man, company, even children!!! it can use for searching, chatting,studying,business,watching, so you can do everything with internet. i think internet is very important for us, it make our life come be simple and convenient. imagine , one day we lost internet,what happen will be ? the word can't developing, people can't contact together and everything be come very hard to do. however the bom internet also dangerous for social by hackers. Children can access into black web, that contain term unfair or they can play game all day and not to study.