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Should students who work very hard in a course earn very high grades,SAT WRITING [5]
I agree that general purpose of grading is complex topic, and We should provide that how we can grade ones.I think that there are two ways for grading.First way, according to students who work very hard in a course second way academic achievement.I agree on the first one because teacher's can only know students' with their works not academic achievement.
Firstly we should support first point of view .For instance, people who works very hard and always try to do the best in all semester have a right to expect high grades. However, when we compare this person with one who doesn't work hard and he/she only has achievement , we can see the big differences .I think that at school, the first important thing for students who want to get high grade is working very hard . This is the only way students can show themselves to the teacher.
Nevertheless some people think academic achievement is also important for grading , and they think it is possible to get high grades without working very hard .They suppose teacher's can determine students' grades only by academic achievement. This sounds ridiculous .
To summarize the topic in my opinion it would be better if the teachers pay attention both of them academic achievement and working very hard because this is the only way teacher's can completely grade students without any do
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