Undergraduate / 'I came to this world without anything' - Brown Supplement Essay [4]

What is something you created that makes you especially proud, and why?

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Like any other new-borns, I came to this world without anything. Creation does not only include invention, but also include personalities of a person. Personality of someone is not fixed on the day we born; we created and gained own personalities from past experiences. Curiosity, creativity, sociality and pertinacity are what I am proud of; these personalities have proved to be essential to my accomplishment as I relentlessly overcame obstacle and gained from painful experiences. Curiosity and pertinacity caused me to gained invaluable knowledge in various field, sociality prompted me to fit into various group of individuals and creativity engendered me to think critically to make decisions.

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