Undergraduate / 'out of ramblings' - Letter To Roomate supplement... w/ a wacky twist... [6]

The twist was good and I really enjoyed your essay, however I feel like you swayed off topic at times, for example the bug thing was too much, instead say something else unique about you. I only picked up that you liked cleaning and cooking, add another quality. But overall you have an awesome essay, it's different from the traditional essays and admission officers love different.

Hope i helped please check my essay.