Undergraduate / 'to be around students who really know how to get down and party' - "why Upenn"? [5]

Hey, great essay!
It's a really unique approach. I don't think the admin officers will find it arrogant or presumptuous that you can image yourself there.

I like how natural your voice sounds. Your humour comes across well.

-as the zenith of research universities in the nation.
-calculating the opportunity cost for families who chose not to send their kids to school
-and is UPenn spelled with a capital 'U' and 'P'? just being picky :P
-I have always found research to grant more insightful than textbooks ever could . i think it'll be easier to understand this way