Undergraduate / 'Russia gave me something to work for' - CommonApp main Essay [12]

Not a problem; your story made it powerful, I'm just here to read.

Also, "two-month" should probably just be "two month," no need for the dash. Hope it helps!

Undergraduate / 'Russia gave me something to work for' - CommonApp main Essay [12]


I look at the foggy city in front of me and think, "One day, I'll make this better."
Grammar error aside, I really liked it. Most people (including myself) have no idea what Russia is like in the current day; I thought that you brought in your culture pretty well into it, I definitely wouldn't be able to come up with anything like that and wouldn't worry about it being generic. I liked the bit about the Russia authors, that too brought the culture into it and is relevant to your points. Just curious too, but where will this be sent to?

I did CommonApp essay too, but what was the full prompt of the bicultural question again? (I did Topic of Choice)