Posts by Misskaylamarie
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Misskaylamarie Feb 5, 2012
Misskaylamarie Feb 5, 2012
Scholarship /
Who in your experience at Cooper High has been your biggest influence and why? [3]
Essay
Who in your experience at Cooper high school has been your biggest influence and why?
250 words or less
As a student at Randall Cooper High school, I have grown from a freshman to a graduating senior. During these four wonderful years I have learned how to be successful in my academics. I would not be where I am today without the help of Mrs. Mosley. Mrs. Mosley has been my biology, AP biology and Anatomy teacher. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence because through her I was able to find my passion for science. Not only was I able to find my passion in science, Mrs. Mosley always assisted me in understanding difficult subjects, as well as motivated me to do well in my academics. Mrs. Mosley helped me improve my study skills and allowed me to use her personal science books to uphold a better understanding of subjects. Mrs. Mosley is kind and thoughtful and she is a great role model. I have decided to major in biology, and I would not have made that choice if I did not have a great teacher like Mrs.Mosley. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence and I am greatful that I was able to be her student at Randall Cooper High school, the lessons and skills I have learned through her will continue to benefit me in academics.
**** Could someone edit and comment on my essay? I really want to win this scholarship. Thank you! *****
Misskaylamarie Jan 12, 2012
Scholarship /
'I plan to major in biology' - Scholarship Louisville [7]
My scholarship Essay needs review. Please could someone read, and review my essay? :)How will your upcoming educational experience contribute to your future commitment of uplifting your campus community and/or the community at large?
I am eager to apply my energy and passion for learning to the University of Louisville. I plan to major in biology, and I believe that the biology department will help me achieve my educational goals. I enjoy science because it allows for critical analysis of theories and vast experimentation which leads to new solutions. In the future, I am interested in the opportunity to apply my biology degree to help the community. I plan to use my education in biology to positively impact my own community. Helping people is my passion, and a background in biology is essential. I aspire to become an Obstetrician/Gynecologist (OB/GYN). An OB/GYN is a physician who specializes in obstetrics and gynecology. Obstetrics is a branch of medical science that deals with the delivery in childbirth. Gynecology is a branch of medical science that deals with diseases and routine physical care of the reproductive system of women. Although the process of achieving a medical career is very challenging, I am confident that with dedication to my studies and with the guidance from the University of Louisville, I will be able to achieve this goal. I am dedicated to work hard, focus and learn from my future U of L professors. To further my insight in entering the health career field, I have been a blood drive committee member for two years. This allows me to volunteer at my high school for the Hoxworth blood drives. The blood drive committee has given me the chance to shadow a Phlebotomist. A Phlebotomist is a nurse or health trained worker in drawing venous blood for testing and/or donation. I was able to learn with a medical team. I also participated in the Health Research Youth Academy,during the summer of 2011. I shadowed physicians, researched cancers, and had physiology lectures. In the future I will make a commitment to continue my blood committee volunteer work and my summer research studies. Not only will this uplift the campus of U of L it will benefit the community at large because... ( IM NOT FINISH) ( How can I end this essay and answer the 2nd question at the same time?)
Misskaylamarie Jan 12, 2012
Misskaylamarie Jan 12, 2012
Misskaylamarie Jan 12, 2012
Scholarship /
'I plan to major in biology' - Scholarship Louisville [7]
Thank you SOOOOOO much!!!!! I am not finished with the essay, I still have to answer the other half of the question. If i write it could you review it also? I have to finish this tonight. but THANK YOU SO MUCH. VITURAL HUGGGGGGG lol i promise im not a creeper, just a sorta stressed senior in high school LOL :) thank you again
Misskaylamarie Jan 12, 2012
Scholarship /
'I plan to major in biology' - Scholarship Louisville [7]
How will your upcoming educational experience contribute to your future commitment of uplifting your campus community and/or the community at large?
I am eager to apply my energy and passion to learn to the University of Louisville. I plan to major in biology and I believe that the biology department will help me achieve my educational goals. I aspire to be a physician...
I seriously need aid in this essay. I have written so many essays that Ive hit a blank wall. I simply just dont know what to write. Could you help me?
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