Undergraduate / 'Basketball and feeling of regret' - Common App Essay [6]

Could've should be changed to could have

We've should be changed to we have

Also, try to explain the rationale you had for leaving the team. I have many questions about your reasons and I'm sure that others will too.

Research Papers / Queen elizabeth as a poet - thesis statement incompleted [5]

Specific Topic for Queen Elizabeth

I'm writing an 8 page paper (minimum) on queen elizabeth I. Despite the fact that she is very interesting I can't come up with a topic specific enough to write my paper on. If anyone can give me an idea for something I could use that would be great. Thanks!