Undergraduate / Lehigh supplement essay - I will contribute to the campus greatly. [3]

yeah good job
but i have feedback to give you
first i liked you r writing the reason why u choose. that was the reputation and u had believed that u can contribute on specific thngs . nut u have to add your ability or skills. cuz its a little non sense to looke for only to the reputation. so pls add it. i mean u have to write like i've capable of .... or i was honored as a.... So let me to prove my goals there in your college or university

i've written those feedback . because i only thnk that this essay must be about yourself almost

okay good luck!