Letters / 'Miss Avsever greatly desires to go to U.S.A' Letter of recommendation to art gallery [2]

urgenttt!!!! This is referance paper.I live in Turkey and I will apply art gallery to intern in New York.I need corrected paper gramaticly.

To Whom It My Concern,
Miss Avsever has been a student of Architecture department on Middle East Technical University. I have had an occasion to observe Avsever 's studies at close hand for 5 years. I observe her respect of not only educational life but also social activities. In this regard, Avsever has acquired a very strong background in artistic conception. Because she take part of different workshops about art and architecture, she has necessary informations about this field. Especially she is selected Yahşibey Workshop in İzmir which is one of the significant project to display her artistic skill. I supported her to continue this success.

Moreover, she has very motivated, hardworking person. When we perform our project on different exhibiton area, Avsever shows her social performance talking with others on general specific subjects. On the our collective activities, I realize that she is good also group works. Sometimes we perform team works for big exhibitions. On these works, she is full of initiative and ready to assume any given responsibility.

As an architectural student, she has required aesthetical care and in this perspective she is master of basic art and architectural conceptions, materials. Especially, I observe her on my work 'see you camouflage', which is against to war. The aim of this performance is to create against war object by using different materials such as timber, iron wire etc. Combination of these materials has significant importance because of giving disaster effect to visitors. Miss Avsever is assistant of me to create our objects and help me to plan and coordinate of exhibition field.

She has also social responsibilities about environmental and cultural issues. Another our collective is Munzur Performance Workshop .We organized this workshop to take attention for environmental distraction and cultural assimilation their religion in Munzur region. Furthermore, this project is supported from government. When we arrange this activity, Avsever is a part of art workshop as a leader. In this workshop, she and her team produce creative, colorful models to describe damage on this region. Especially, these objects interest people of Munzur.After this workshop, a manifesto is declared and objects are exhibited on Ankara which is capital of Turkey and highlighted on media.

Miss Avsever greatly desires to go to U.S.A to carry out his internship there. Her aim is to increase his experience and knowledge and also keep in contact with the most up-to-date artistic developments and architectural design. For this reason, I am writing this letter of recommendation, and trust that Avsever is ready for a fruitful and successful period of internship. In this respect, I strongly recommend him for studies in your museum, without any reservations at all.

Yours Faithfully,

Letters / (Exhibition & Collection Management and Publications Departments) cover letter [NEW]

note:I dont know that whether I am clear or not as a cover letter ?? and I live in turkey and I will apply a museum in America.Should I take attention to this like intercultural property etc.??

Dear Human Resources Director

I am writing in response to the 2012 Summer Intern Program begins June 4th and ends August 3th. I would like to be considered for your internship on Exhibition & Collection Management and Publications Departments. Not only my academic commitment but also my museum works, exhibitions and workshops make me fit candidate for this position.

I am currently an undergraduate student in the Department of Architecture on METU in Turkey. My architectural education provides me basic and specific knowledge and about art and architectural conception. To assist my information, I selected special lessons such as history of architecture and fundamentals of site planning. With the help of these lessons, we often visit museums and I have a chance to experience museum works more.

Moreover I have been involved in variety workshop and exhibition for four years; I have highly talented to coordinate the collections and exhibitions with art handlers, design and construction. Therefore, I am confident that I can help to organize exhibition materials and maintain productive relationships with Exhibition & Collection Management Department.

My background includes previous experience coordinating and leading project assistant. I take part of several activities which is not only organized faculty department but also non-profit organizations about 20th century art and artists from social, cultural and political perspective. On this period, I have learned efficiently art and artists from different part of the world. After these activities, we declare manifestos and highlight on media. To realize these attractions, we produce lots of catalogues, brochures, posters, calendars etc. with the help of my advanced computer skills in the Photo Edit and MS Office program. For this reason, I am fully prepared to intern Publications Department.

The curriculum vitae and statement can serve to provide you with greater details of my accomplishment and what I have to offer.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely yours,

Note: If you are interested with me, I am available for interview. I ready to intern declared time. My contact information is on below of letter. Moreover I have special passport to take visa easily. In addition to this, relations offer me accommodation. If you accept my application, I can successfully overcome necessary needs such as daily consumption, flight, passport, accommodation etc.