Essays / I have an essay question (character and citizenship trait) [3]

There were few interesting facts in Emily Carr's life. One thing was she liked to raise nature animals such as raccoons, squirrels, parrots and canaries and brought them home. Another thing was she was the first female to ride a horse astride in Victoria, because women were more"ladylike" sidesaddle position in nineteen century. Third one was she tore up the garden fence to build her easels. Right now, the easel plus her paintings were collected by Group of Seven. These kinds of things made her life more interesting.

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