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Prostitution: Should Legal or Illegal?

Prostitution is often called the world's oldest profession. It's been around since the beginning of time and can be traced back to ancient civilization. Prostitution hasn't stopped after thousands of years and it's not going to stop anytime soon. Prostitution is already legal in some parts of the world, but not in Canada and the United States. Pro-prostitution think prostitution should be legalized. They state that legalizing it would solve more problems than it would create and people could be protected from diseases, the streets could be kept cleaner, and prostitutes would have a safer working environment. Anti-prostitution demands that legal prostitution will increase the sex industry and human trafficking.

Prostitution will hurt peoples. This is because prostitutes can cause a disease such as HIV. Pro-prostitution opposed that statement. Pro-prostitution demands that prostitution gives benefit to the customer because the customer gets their pleasure. It fulfils both people's needs. Even though prostitution is not legal, it will continue to happen. They will find a way around the law, and continue with their business. If it is legalized, laws can be made to keep prostitutes and people safer than they are now.

Some people don't think much of prostitutes. Peoples think that the prostitutes who spread the disease. This is because most of the prostitutes are drug addicts which cause HIV. For the few bad ones, they would be the ones who would most benefit from legalization. Prostitutes could be provided with the necessary health and safety items to prevent any diseases or sicknesses from spreading. If prostitution was legal, they could have a designated place to work. This would keep residential neighbourhoods and other valued streets clean. It will be impossible to stop prostitution but it can be controlled. The government could legalize prostitution requiring the prostitute had a permit, and got drug tests, and medical exams on a regular basis. If any banned substances or diseases were found they will be stopped. Prostitution would be consider as a business and would have to pay taxes like everyone else. The taxes money could be used for something useful, like helping the prostitutes find a better job, and help get them off the street. If any violations were detected, then the law would be enforced.

Legal prostitution will ensure that prostitutes would no longer need a pimp. This would help prevent pressure to drug use and would stop pimps from abusing their prostitutes, and the prostitutes wouldn't be afraid to quit their job. Anti-prostitution thinks that if the government legalizes prostitution, they are turning themselves into pimps because they are taking responsibility for prostitutes. This will make the government need to spend a lot of money to take care of all the prostitutes.

Does becoming a prostitute make you less of a person? I think a person's choice of occupation should not be put down. It's that person's choice to do what they do and, whether you agree with it or not, they still deserve some respect. Some are concerned for the prostitute's children. What does a child tell the kids at school that their parents do for a living? This is one problem I have not got a solution to. There will always be an ethical concern. The problem exists now, and it will exist if prostitution is legalized.

Pro-prostitution think the benefits to legalizing prostitution are greater. If prostitution is legal, it will offer more help and protection to the prostitutes. Other opinions are that prostitution should stay illegal because if prostitution is legal, it will increase the population of prostitutes and abortion will occur. There are many fair arguments against prostitution but I think it has more benefits. The people will be kept safer. It is going to happen whether we like it or not, so I say we control it. Don't let be harmful to society. The human sex drive can't be prohibited, so why is it? Fighting against human nature is a battle that can't be won, so why fight it?