Undergraduate / 'photography for Life-long learning' - statement for degree of Creative Media [3]

Please confine your statement to no more than 300 words.

The content of your statement should explain why you wish to study the programme and how the qualification is relevant to your career aspirations, as well as your expectation of the programme.

I am interested in the programme because I known my path. I depending photography for Life-long learning and animation for Continuing Professional Development. This programme give me to learning that. I enjoy the photographic life, sometimes I will hiking and captured the beautiful scenery; sometimes I will riding bicycle and freedom of filming. I also to participate in some photo competition, I was lucky to get some awards. I get a lot of industrial attachment in IVE, such as photography, filming documentary, animation advertising. I confirmed my interset and career in the internship, I also got a Industrial Attachment of scholarship.

I want to be an animation director. I realized I can't achieve this goal in current level. I need from this course to achieve a higher level in order to be an animation director. This programme can learn more about animation, such as photography, storytelling, computer graphics, special effect etc.

Upon earning a degree, I will do a freelance to get more time to creative animation. And I will apply a sponsor to help my creative, such as Create Hong Kong and Cyberport. With experienced professors, one of the best equipped facilities for creative media in the region, and courses that combine practical and theoretical knowledge, Bachelor of Science (Hons) in Creative Media at XX University will give me a rich learning environment to nurture my intellects, along with an excellent platform for career advancement.

Questions:
1: Is there any grammar mistakes above?
2: Does this statement answered the questions required properly?
Thanks for your help with deep appreciation.