laputa
Mar 8, 2012
Writing Feedback / I wish to purchase a business and not a house if I have enough money [3]
Topic: You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy. Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
My paragraph.
Someone asked me that If you had enough money to purchase something such as a house or a business, which one I would choose. It is interested and I never think that before. But I always hope that I will own a business. Therefore, purchasing a business maybe the best. Why?
Firstly, I will have my owned business, which's the happiest thing I can do. Everyone have to do anything I direct such as the way to design product, hire employees, or built factory... I will become a boss, and especially avoid pressure from others. And I can get a lot of experience about how to manage people, how to raise capital,or how to make a good relationship with staffs. They help me a lot to succeed in my life.
Secondly, A higher position. Do business means that I will be a businessman, and so everyone must be showed their respectability with me. They have to admire what I make and do. I will pay everyone's attention to my business, which 's attractive.
Finally, I can earn money by myself through buying business. I can sell my products, make a potential market or find a good partner to make profit. Then I spend a mount of money for travelling around the world with my family, or shopping, or built a large house.
Maybe a lot of people feel that I'm going far from fact, but these are all I expect to do.
Topic: You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy. Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
My paragraph.
Someone asked me that If you had enough money to purchase something such as a house or a business, which one I would choose. It is interested and I never think that before. But I always hope that I will own a business. Therefore, purchasing a business maybe the best. Why?
Firstly, I will have my owned business, which's the happiest thing I can do. Everyone have to do anything I direct such as the way to design product, hire employees, or built factory... I will become a boss, and especially avoid pressure from others. And I can get a lot of experience about how to manage people, how to raise capital,or how to make a good relationship with staffs. They help me a lot to succeed in my life.
Secondly, A higher position. Do business means that I will be a businessman, and so everyone must be showed their respectability with me. They have to admire what I make and do. I will pay everyone's attention to my business, which 's attractive.
Finally, I can earn money by myself through buying business. I can sell my products, make a potential market or find a good partner to make profit. Then I spend a mount of money for travelling around the world with my family, or shopping, or built a large house.
Maybe a lot of people feel that I'm going far from fact, but these are all I expect to do.
