Book Reports / Oswalt Patton's Article on Otaku "Time to die" - Thesis Statement help [3]

Working on a thesis statement for a paper on Oswalt Patton's Article on Otaku "Time to die"

This is what I came up with and would like some feedback

The concept of Otaku has indeed affected our lives and creativity by allowing virtually anybody to quickly become an expert in any particular subject, to dive immediately into anyone of your past diversions for an infinite amount of time, and to recapture and recut any of your favorite stories into something new.