Writing Feedback / 'John Halas a cartoonist' - the cartoonist research essay [3]

Hi Rhett,

You need more help than just basic proofreading. A lot of your sentences don't make sense, there are a few instances of run-ons, and some general issues with idea flow and sentence structure. This, in my opinion, is definitely not a final draft that is ready for proofreading. You could really benefit from a lot of feedback and in-depth editing.

Best,

Kibin