weeddaisy
Mar 29, 2012
Scholarship / 'whatever the setbacks are..' - short scholarship [4]
I catch your meaning and what you want to say. However, I think you have to make various kinds of sentence such as simple, complex...to make your essay more colorful. One more thing I want to share with you is that the basic high school essay should be organized in the following five paragraph structure:
Introduction
Body Paragraph One
Body Paragraph Two
Body Paragraph Three
Conclusion
Good luck with your scholarship!
I catch your meaning and what you want to say. However, I think you have to make various kinds of sentence such as simple, complex...to make your essay more colorful. One more thing I want to share with you is that the basic high school essay should be organized in the following five paragraph structure:
Introduction
Body Paragraph One
Body Paragraph Two
Body Paragraph Three
Conclusion
Good luck with your scholarship!