charlqua
Dec 11, 2008
Grammar, Usage / What is the difference between a hypothesis & aim? [5]
Thank you very much - all is much more clearer. Now to get started lol!
Thank you very much - all is much more clearer. Now to get started lol!
charlqua
Dec 10, 2008
Grammar, Usage / What is the difference between a hypothesis & aim? [5]
Hi
Hope i'm in the right place here!!
I'm a mature student just returned to studying and i have to write an assignment - the first two things i have to do is a 'statement of hypothesis' and then the 'aim of assignment'
I'm having difficulty trying to figure out what the difference is - when i start writing they both seem to say the same thing
Any help would be greatly appreciated
thanks
Hi
Hope i'm in the right place here!!
I'm a mature student just returned to studying and i have to write an assignment - the first two things i have to do is a 'statement of hypothesis' and then the 'aim of assignment'
I'm having difficulty trying to figure out what the difference is - when i start writing they both seem to say the same thing
Any help would be greatly appreciated
thanks
charlqua
Dec 10, 2008
Undergraduate / Addtional Personal Statement (UC)- "my internship at TSRI" [2]
Hi
After first reading your essay, my gut instinct was to say remover the paragraph as it seems so indecisive comapared to the rest of the writing. But after reading it again, i think it's the first and last senstences that don't sit comfortably with me. They just seem to jar with the rest of essay. The lines seem to be out of sync, whereas they rest of the paragraph convery your focus and interest of the subject and of the work you were doing.
Hope my humble opinion helps a little.
Hi
After first reading your essay, my gut instinct was to say remover the paragraph as it seems so indecisive comapared to the rest of the writing. But after reading it again, i think it's the first and last senstences that don't sit comfortably with me. They just seem to jar with the rest of essay. The lines seem to be out of sync, whereas they rest of the paragraph convery your focus and interest of the subject and of the work you were doing.
Hope my humble opinion helps a little.
charlqua
Dec 10, 2008
Writing Feedback / essay about world crisis [3]
Hi
Starting at the basics, there are a few words missing and some spelling mistakes throughout the essay. I personally find that if i print out an essay and read it out loudly i spot these little mistakes and from there i can concentrate on cohesion and how it all works together. Hope that helps in a little way.
Hi
Starting at the basics, there are a few words missing and some spelling mistakes throughout the essay. I personally find that if i print out an essay and read it out loudly i spot these little mistakes and from there i can concentrate on cohesion and how it all works together. Hope that helps in a little way.
