gabrieelh
Mar 15, 2012
Undergraduate / "my job at a bank and its influence" Short Answer for Common App work experience [2]
I'm ready to be bombarded. Please review, proofread, and critique this short answer. please and thank you! :D
"Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below."
For nearly four years I have worked at the Bank of ABC, one of the biggest bank in the country. Although a good job, was not the job I wanted when I started, but the work I needed to help in the family expenses and continue my education.
On my first day (of my first job), I was terrified. I was shy and uncommunicative, and I was supposed to do business with the bank's customers in the same way a experienced employee would do. After some time of work, when I started receiving the first compliments of my managers and clients I realized how much work was helping me become a better person. It has improved my social skills, my time management abilities; It put me in touch with different people and drove me to different situations to solve by my self.
My job as a bank employee not only allowed me to continue my degree in Computer Sciences, but also helped me develop skills necessary for any successful professional, I would never learn in college.
I'm ready to be bombarded. Please review, proofread, and critique this short answer. please and thank you! :D
"Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below."
For nearly four years I have worked at the Bank of ABC, one of the biggest bank in the country. Although a good job, was not the job I wanted when I started, but the work I needed to help in the family expenses and continue my education.
On my first day (of my first job), I was terrified. I was shy and uncommunicative, and I was supposed to do business with the bank's customers in the same way a experienced employee would do. After some time of work, when I started receiving the first compliments of my managers and clients I realized how much work was helping me become a better person. It has improved my social skills, my time management abilities; It put me in touch with different people and drove me to different situations to solve by my self.
My job as a bank employee not only allowed me to continue my degree in Computer Sciences, but also helped me develop skills necessary for any successful professional, I would never learn in college.
