DENNISHA
Apr 7, 2012
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Citizen's responsibilities [5]
Well this is my idea (Brainstorming)[/b]
[b]Paragraph 1
i would argue that being a citizen has more responsibilities just paying tax
Paragraph 2
Benefit for just paying taxes
- Simple, we as citizens should receive benefits due to we pay the tax
- The Government has responsibility to its own citizens
- We don't have resources to improve our nations
Paragraph 3
Paying taxes is not enough
- we should take care our countries (give one or two examples)
- Paying taxes should not be considered as a contribution but an obligation
- Improvement in our countries might leads to better life so we should give more contribution.
Paragraph 4
Conclusion
Give your opinion (combine paragraph 1 and 3)
Well this is my idea (Brainstorming)[/b]
[b]Paragraph 1
i would argue that being a citizen has more responsibilities just paying tax
Paragraph 2
Benefit for just paying taxes
- Simple, we as citizens should receive benefits due to we pay the tax
- The Government has responsibility to its own citizens
- We don't have resources to improve our nations
Paragraph 3
Paying taxes is not enough
- we should take care our countries (give one or two examples)
- Paying taxes should not be considered as a contribution but an obligation
- Improvement in our countries might leads to better life so we should give more contribution.
Paragraph 4
Conclusion
Give your opinion (combine paragraph 1 and 3)