tomtom123
Apr 7, 2012
Undergraduate / Chemical Engineering - Waitlist essay for UC Davis [4]
UC Davis has been one of my top choices for College throughout my high school life. UC Davis has a very impressive engineering program that I would love to be a part of for my interest in math and science has propelled me towards chemical engineering. With UC Davis' extensive resources, I believe will fuel my determination and push me to my goal of success. To show my seriousness towards chemical engineering, I am taking three AP classes, which two are Chemistry and Calculus AB. Furthermore, I cannot put any more emphasis on the importance of a campus to me, for which I want a new experience in living in a somewhat secluded for focusing on studies but not too far from a metropolis for a sense of home or a period of break. UC Davis can provide me with this since it is only a fifteen minute drive from Sacramento from campus.
My essay is somewhat short of the 200 word limit. Can someone help edit/add to my essay?
UC Davis has been one of my top choices for College throughout my high school life. UC Davis has a very impressive engineering program that I would love to be a part of for my interest in math and science has propelled me towards chemical engineering. With UC Davis' extensive resources, I believe will fuel my determination and push me to my goal of success. To show my seriousness towards chemical engineering, I am taking three AP classes, which two are Chemistry and Calculus AB. Furthermore, I cannot put any more emphasis on the importance of a campus to me, for which I want a new experience in living in a somewhat secluded for focusing on studies but not too far from a metropolis for a sense of home or a period of break. UC Davis can provide me with this since it is only a fifteen minute drive from Sacramento from campus.
My essay is somewhat short of the 200 word limit. Can someone help edit/add to my essay?