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Apr 11, 2012
Writing Feedback / 'Online classes versus conventional classes' - my argumentative essay [4]

Hi skarlet,

I am thinking of this :

"...Even though people connecting to a computer can't know their fellow students' ideas to share theirs/ in order to share theirs.."

"...can share their thoughts .."

please , these are just suggestions , maybe you'll have better ones

best regards
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