Undergraduate / 'Summers with senior citizens' - common app short essay - volunteering [3]

your essay is just fake. I have heard of this story many times, and this just won't work.

This is a rip off from a famous story where a singer sang "danny boy". You just changed the setting to a volunteer work and substituted different people. With this type of dishonesty, you won't get in to any of the schools that you want to get in.

you are a disgrace of all koreans.