jenny08066
Dec 28, 2008
Undergraduate / NU statement (Center for Student Involvement) [5]
This is a part of my statement
I hope to get some feedback (grammar mistakes, awkward sentences...)
Many thanks!
I also would love to be part of Center for Student Involvement (CSI)at Northwestern. My experience of Habitat for Humanity in Chiangmai, Thailand was truly one of the life-changing experiences. Not only constructing houses for the people who were in need but also interacting with the community as a whole transformed me inside out. I became to appreciate trivialities as I saw what it is like to be without them. At Northwestern where I see numerous opportunities to make a change in the society, I have to say my heart is already with them. I do hope you will consider having me as a member of the Northwestern family.
This is a part of my statement
I hope to get some feedback (grammar mistakes, awkward sentences...)
Many thanks!
I also would love to be part of Center for Student Involvement (CSI)at Northwestern. My experience of Habitat for Humanity in Chiangmai, Thailand was truly one of the life-changing experiences. Not only constructing houses for the people who were in need but also interacting with the community as a whole transformed me inside out. I became to appreciate trivialities as I saw what it is like to be without them. At Northwestern where I see numerous opportunities to make a change in the society, I have to say my heart is already with them. I do hope you will consider having me as a member of the Northwestern family.
