lava852
Aug 12, 2012
Writing Feedback / IELTS - POSSIBLE WAYS OF LEARNING ENGLISH, INCLUDING IN THE SPEAKING COUNTRY. [3]
Sounds okay overall. Make sure your commas and full stops are correctly placed though.
I altered your conclusion a bit to make it slightly improved.
To summarize, in this modern age, it is possible to learn English in numerous diverse methods, however, living in an English speaking country is a superior alternative.
And your introduction.
Many people believe that English, like any other language, can be learned easily in countries where it is used as a native language, while others argue that English can be taught anywhere in this world. I completely agree to this point of view and this essay will discuss both approaches of learning in detail.
Of course, it's your choice whether to use mine or not :)
Sounds okay overall. Make sure your commas and full stops are correctly placed though.
I altered your conclusion a bit to make it slightly improved.
To summarize, in this modern age, it is possible to learn English in numerous diverse methods, however, living in an English speaking country is a superior alternative.
And your introduction.
Many people believe that English, like any other language, can be learned easily in countries where it is used as a native language, while others argue that English can be taught anywhere in this world. I completely agree to this point of view and this essay will discuss both approaches of learning in detail.
Of course, it's your choice whether to use mine or not :)
