Faith4
Aug 25, 2012
Undergraduate / "The world I come from" -Uc Prompt (dark and twisted) [2]
*Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.*
Just when I thought I was at a dead end, nowhere to go, no one to turn to, I met an amazing woman who changed my perspective on everything. The world I came from was a very dark and twisted world. My life may not have always been the best but I sure have learned to make the best of every challenging situation I face. Not many know my story because I do not like to share it. For many years I put up with abuse until the age of thirteen. When I began therapy, that's when I met Dr. Zoila. She, without a doubt, is the woman who has shaped my dreams and aspirations. Meeting her is the best thing that has ever happened to me and I would love to one day be able to help people the way she helped me. My dream is to one day become a psychologist and work at the Barbra Sinatra Children's Center. Nothing would make me happier than to work with children who can relate to my story. I want to help kids regain their childhood, and let them know that they will always have someone there for them Like Zoila was always there for me; someone they can go to or talk to without feeling afraid of being judged. She made me realize that my past defines who I am and everything I have been through has made me a stronger person. She has made me realize my true identity and I am a dedicated, kid hearted, and motivated girl. The world I have come from has not been a pretty place, but I am capable of creating my own new world now and that is exactly what I have been doing these past four years and will continue to do so. The new world I come from now is filled with people who care for me and will never bring me down. There's nothing but happiness in this new world, sure I'll hit a couple bumps on the road but I will no longer let anything bring me down. I have come from two completely different worlds, one bad and one good but I have met amazing people along the way who have made me realize bad experiences sometimes shape you more than positive ones.
Metaphorically speaking, this woman is my world and she along with my past has shaped me to become the person I am now. I am strong, dedicated, and ambitious girl I will always see the bright side in things. The experiences and people that make up my world have made me realize what my true dreams and aspirations are in life. What turned out to be the worst time of my life came out to be the most life changing. I do not have to live in a dark and twisted world because I have moved to a bright world which is the one I come from now.
-PLEASE REVISE!(:
*Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.*
Just when I thought I was at a dead end, nowhere to go, no one to turn to, I met an amazing woman who changed my perspective on everything. The world I came from was a very dark and twisted world. My life may not have always been the best but I sure have learned to make the best of every challenging situation I face. Not many know my story because I do not like to share it. For many years I put up with abuse until the age of thirteen. When I began therapy, that's when I met Dr. Zoila. She, without a doubt, is the woman who has shaped my dreams and aspirations. Meeting her is the best thing that has ever happened to me and I would love to one day be able to help people the way she helped me. My dream is to one day become a psychologist and work at the Barbra Sinatra Children's Center. Nothing would make me happier than to work with children who can relate to my story. I want to help kids regain their childhood, and let them know that they will always have someone there for them Like Zoila was always there for me; someone they can go to or talk to without feeling afraid of being judged. She made me realize that my past defines who I am and everything I have been through has made me a stronger person. She has made me realize my true identity and I am a dedicated, kid hearted, and motivated girl. The world I have come from has not been a pretty place, but I am capable of creating my own new world now and that is exactly what I have been doing these past four years and will continue to do so. The new world I come from now is filled with people who care for me and will never bring me down. There's nothing but happiness in this new world, sure I'll hit a couple bumps on the road but I will no longer let anything bring me down. I have come from two completely different worlds, one bad and one good but I have met amazing people along the way who have made me realize bad experiences sometimes shape you more than positive ones.
Metaphorically speaking, this woman is my world and she along with my past has shaped me to become the person I am now. I am strong, dedicated, and ambitious girl I will always see the bright side in things. The experiences and people that make up my world have made me realize what my true dreams and aspirations are in life. What turned out to be the worst time of my life came out to be the most life changing. I do not have to live in a dark and twisted world because I have moved to a bright world which is the one I come from now.
-PLEASE REVISE!(: