Writing Feedback / 'the hardest question for a teenage boy or girl' - article on "I want to become a..." [4]

hi!

First of all, you should enter the name of the university you are applying to and explain on short how it will help you to fullfill your dream.

I recommend that, you should delete, it's just like selecting a tiny droplet out of a big ocean , because it does not make a proper sense as picking a droplet from an ocean is a simple job which can be done with the help of a dropper.