sarahira
Sep 5, 2012
Writing Feedback / Difference between present and past generation about stress [5]
HI GUYS ! I write again the essay , could you take a look? thank you
"Difference between present and past generation about stress."
Stress is born with modern society . Better still it is a real disease whose causes lie in the frenetic rhythm of metropolitan life. On the contrary the past generation were not under the stress pressure. Hence not always the progress creates advantages.
The reason of stress in modern world are different , principally due by the increase of daily activity. The race to money , dissatisfaction , urban traffic , overcrowding, together also influence psychologically men determining a state of stress. Consequently everyone who lives actively their time is stressed; the children ,who apparently seems to have not problems, actually assimilate it through their parents. As their parents , children are too busy , not only with school commitments, but sport and play activity too .
On the contrary , past generation did not have such daily activity . work hours were greater as distractions were fewer . they spent their time with family . the cities were not overcrowd , no traffic , no pollution , but surely the service were not as today. Man lived in different way , almost contenting himself of what he had. As a result the stress was less , probably one time life was different and better than nowadays.
In conclusion with passing of time the things seems to be changed in positive ,but evidently is not right . In the past there was less stress than today, it is strange but the increase of the activity has raised the stress.
HI GUYS ! I write again the essay , could you take a look? thank you
"Difference between present and past generation about stress."
Stress is born with modern society . Better still it is a real disease whose causes lie in the frenetic rhythm of metropolitan life. On the contrary the past generation were not under the stress pressure. Hence not always the progress creates advantages.
The reason of stress in modern world are different , principally due by the increase of daily activity. The race to money , dissatisfaction , urban traffic , overcrowding, together also influence psychologically men determining a state of stress. Consequently everyone who lives actively their time is stressed; the children ,who apparently seems to have not problems, actually assimilate it through their parents. As their parents , children are too busy , not only with school commitments, but sport and play activity too .
On the contrary , past generation did not have such daily activity . work hours were greater as distractions were fewer . they spent their time with family . the cities were not overcrowd , no traffic , no pollution , but surely the service were not as today. Man lived in different way , almost contenting himself of what he had. As a result the stress was less , probably one time life was different and better than nowadays.
In conclusion with passing of time the things seems to be changed in positive ,but evidently is not right . In the past there was less stress than today, it is strange but the increase of the activity has raised the stress.
