Undergraduate / The Fried Chicken Inspiration- UNDERGRADUATE ADMISSION SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY [3]

I love your piece, its very objective and an outstanding awareness of self. I can surely bet on your admission if it is to be purely based on this essay. All the best.

Graduate / My motivation letter for Master of Economics scholarship [4]

There are a number of grammatical mistakes that you need to correct, for instance i feel such a statement as "More than my expectation, I not only learned " would be presented as, "Beyond my expectations. i not only got to learn about...but also..." Just a pointer, otherwise the essay build up is fine.