Unanswered [8] | Urgent [0]
  

Posts by rtfbvg
Joined: Sep 9, 2012
Last Post: Sep 17, 2012
Threads: 1
Posts: -  

From: China

Displayed posts: 1
sort: Latest first   Oldest first  | 
rtfbvg   
Sep 17, 2012
Writing Feedback / [IELTS TASK 2] Developing countries are focusing on tourism. Reason and your opinion. [2]

Many developing countries are increasing expanding their tourist industries. Why are they doing so? Is it a positive development?

Nowadays, an increasing number of impoverished nations are focusing on the development of tourism. It is no doubt that tourism is becoming a crucial industry in all countries.

In such southeastern Asian developing countries as Thailand, India and so on, tourism has tackled the unemployment for local inhabitants to some extent. More specifically,it even stimulating the economic prosperity as well. Furthermore, tourism ha been alternative to agriculture to survive local residents. And this is the main reason why these developing states highlight the significant of tourism.

Nevertheless, nothing can be immune from criticism, the negative should not be ignored, including tourism. Although there are some positive effect for developing nations,but the local nature balance might be broke by numerous tourists, China is a good example for this. A vast number of poetic and picturesque tourist attractions has no longer been attractive in China. And some of them have been vanished from this planet. Additionally, some local traditional customs might face an enormous impact from foreign culture, and some local dwellers may gradually abandon their unique customs just for a higher living standard. As a result, the authorities have to make great efforts to protect these endemic customs.

Based on what i mentioned above, I am favour that the negative of tourism overweigh its positive for an impoverished nations. Economy can be prosperous across other methods, however national environment can not be easily recovered. The natural resource is a fortune we borrow from our descendants rather than a heritage inherit from ancestors.
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳