Writing Feedback / Social Networking - how does it affect us? Need third body paragraph and conclusion. [3]

Look for the negative effects of social sites as you analyze their impact in the society. For example you can write that social networking sites have adverse effects on the social welfare of the society. Nowadays, people do not concentrate on the positive necessities of the sites of enhancing socialization. Instead, many people prefer flirting and encouraging prostitution on the internet. Therefore, the sites derail the moral values of the society.

Also, ensure that you summarize all the points that you have in your first, second, and third paragraphs as part of your conclusion. This will make the whole conclusion look perfect.

Do not forget to proofread your work so that you can change the grammatical errors. Such as in the second paragraph, change the word "Since most of the conversation are took place on Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace, the users of social networking technology are really concerned about public evaluations" to since most of the conversation that take place on Facebook, Twitter, and MySpace are about evaluations.