topjackie
Dec 24, 2012
Scholarship / They are in need of science education; Scholarship - How You Give Back to Community? [4]
advice:
perhaps u could tell us a personal story about what cause u to have the idea of devoting to science education, instead of stating the importance of science education. people will feel more touched by the stories.
the whole essay is a bit mundane, not really unique.
advice:
perhaps u could tell us a personal story about what cause u to have the idea of devoting to science education, instead of stating the importance of science education. people will feel more touched by the stories.
the whole essay is a bit mundane, not really unique.
