Undergraduate / 'answers for why taking computer science'; my curiosity in technology [4]

well i also think that is a little too emotional. so i make a new one.
how about this one? is this also feels a little too emotional? or weird?

Algorithms, such a nonsense word I do not even know what it is before I learn computer science. Through the past two years I had learn about algorithms, I have seen so much benefits in it. To learn about programming, making application, developing a system, working on a database, and others with programming language I had currently learn such as C++, JAVA, SQL and friends. Those are already implemented in everywhere you see and use on computer, web, database, e-commerce, and others.

Example of that which you almost use everyday, such as electronic card, ATM, e-mail, your phone you are using, train transportation system, 'googling', weather prediction, GPS, facebook, twitter, and others are all created by developing a program which is created by the developer. Based on how important of the needed of the implementation of computer science, I guess this course would really benefits me in my future. This thought was the one who brought me to pick computer science for my lecture. I have been taking it seriously and I am sure that my choice two years ago to pick computer science for my lesson is never wrong.