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Oct 16, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Successful dancer's performance' - NYU supplement "what intrigues you" [2]
Your essay isn't silly at all
It shows passion for your culture and something that you have interest in.
I do feel (if you have more room) you can add more description to the dance, and maybe an example of how it's helped you.
just personal touches.
Your essay isn't silly at all
It shows passion for your culture and something that you have interest in.
I do feel (if you have more room) you can add more description to the dance, and maybe an example of how it's helped you.
just personal touches.
