megsters99
Oct 18, 2012
Writing Feedback / "International Study" - Higher education should be open to all (discuss) [2]
Chhan Naroth,
I completely agree with you. This applies to me because, I am from a not very rich family, so its going to be hard for me to get into a very good school and get the education that I need. I am very smart, I have a 4.0 GPA, but I am going to have to work harder to get in the collage that i want to go to, which is Stanford, Yale, or Harvard, then let's say a person with more money than me because i am going to have to get a full ride scholarship, in order to go there. They are giving scholarships to the rich who don't need it as much as the poorer.
I would include that information in your paper, I think that it will help get your point across!
Very good job though!
-Megan
Chhan Naroth,
I completely agree with you. This applies to me because, I am from a not very rich family, so its going to be hard for me to get into a very good school and get the education that I need. I am very smart, I have a 4.0 GPA, but I am going to have to work harder to get in the collage that i want to go to, which is Stanford, Yale, or Harvard, then let's say a person with more money than me because i am going to have to get a full ride scholarship, in order to go there. They are giving scholarships to the rich who don't need it as much as the poorer.
I would include that information in your paper, I think that it will help get your point across!
Very good job though!
-Megan
