jollyphan
Apr 4, 2013
Undergraduate / I could create art as a form of employment; SOP/SCAD graphic design BA [4]
firstly, i think the start of the essay ''I will not say I 'realized' I had a passion for art at a young age. This is not true, because I never had this point of discovery in my life,...'' is not so impressive to the reader, not to say negative reaction to the writer.
secondly, i think not '' been a part of who I am '',but ''beena part of who I am''
that's all i want to say!
firstly, i think the start of the essay ''I will not say I 'realized' I had a passion for art at a young age. This is not true, because I never had this point of discovery in my life,...'' is not so impressive to the reader, not to say negative reaction to the writer.
secondly, i think not '' been a part of who I am '',but ''been
that's all i want to say!
