Essays / I want to major in biology - how to write Rutgers New Brunswick essay? [4]

Great idea. That's definitely unique and interesting. Your experience there can totally impact other students.

Undergraduate / 'the heap of garbage' - University of Washington Essay ~ Cultural Difference [4]

Nice job! I often get bored reading a lot of the essays on here but yours actually made me want to keep reading. It felt a bit slow in the middle of the second paragraph however, because there was so much description about the actual process. If people aren't really interested in the environment they won't care about "compostable materials release methane when decaying in a landfill." I would consider just taking that out entirely. Otherwise, good work.

Undergraduate / "Ms Tutu! Ms. Tutu, I need help!" ; EXTRACURRICULAR / Tutoring [5]

Great grammar! I didn't find anything that needed correcting. I think this is a very good aspect of your life to discuss and it's definitely something colleges like to hear. I would keep it the way it is.

Essays / I want to major in biology - how to write Rutgers New Brunswick essay? [4]

What exactly are you thinking of studying? Since college has such a diverse student population that's definitely an aspect that will affect your experience there. People from different cultures and upbringings tend to widen our perspectives on what the world and its people are like.

Undergraduate / Ringling transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. [2]

Quite a few grammatical errors.

"Ever since I was little I wanted to be a veterinarian. I grew up with cats and dogs..."

Consider saying art schools rather than art type.

And use THAN when comparing.

When you mention "I thought it would be awesome to" I would clarify to be a veterinarian because it's a bit unclear.

Also, I would stick to periods rather than exclamation marks, it gives the essay a more serious tone.