essay101
Nov 15, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Helen Keller'; Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, [3]
This essay is very well written, and the connections between yourself and Hellen Keller are well done. However, there are some things I would like to ask and point out.
Does this essay have to be about somebody that you know personally? If not, then great job :)
Secondly, at the end you write "I am one of a kind, just like Helen Keller." I would change the phrase "one of a kind" just because there are others with the same hearing loss, and it may come off strange.
But other than that, great job!
This essay is very well written, and the connections between yourself and Hellen Keller are well done. However, there are some things I would like to ask and point out.
Does this essay have to be about somebody that you know personally? If not, then great job :)
Secondly, at the end you write "I am one of a kind, just like Helen Keller." I would change the phrase "one of a kind" just because there are others with the same hearing loss, and it may come off strange.
But other than that, great job!