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Nov 15, 2012
Undergraduate / 'Helen Keller'; Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, [3]

This essay is very well written, and the connections between yourself and Hellen Keller are well done. However, there are some things I would like to ask and point out.

Does this essay have to be about somebody that you know personally? If not, then great job :)
Secondly, at the end you write "I am one of a kind, just like Helen Keller." I would change the phrase "one of a kind" just because there are others with the same hearing loss, and it may come off strange.

But other than that, great job!
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