Letters / 'specialized areas' - Letter of Motivation for Master of Electromechnical Engineering [6]

Dear All Members,

I would like you to help review my letter of motivation. I write this letter to apply for a Master Program of Electromechanical Engineering. Please help me give yous suggestions.

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Dear Professors,

I am a fresh graduated student from ITC with a Bachelor's Degree of Industrial and Mechanical Engineering. I wish to pursue my degree of Master of Science in Electromechanical Engineering at Vrije Universiteit Brussel. I am interested in studying Electromechanical Engineering because it has a practical application as well as a theoretical basis such as machine construction, automobile industry, application of machinery, production distribution and application of electric energy, etc. I extremely believe that there is only Vrije Universiteit Brussel would broaden my knowledge in this field in more greater depth. My goal is to eventually working for a small to medium size company in Vehicle Technology and Transport field, so I would like to sharpen my knowledge and become more confident in applying knowledge correctly. Lastly, I would like to improve myself than just an academics. Learning new things everyday is a challenge and very important to me.

Since having thoroughly enjoyed the academic study in Mechanical Design, Mechanical Construction, Mechanical Production, Organs of Machines, and MATLAB, I strongly believe that the courses program in Electromechanical Engineering and my qualifications would be very well-suited for this program.

In addition to my academic study, I have involved in extra-curricular activities such as taking part in a study club, sport club, music club and project club that led me to be well-developed in working with a group of people with an interpersonal skills, a communication skills, and a leadership skills. For example, having taken part in Engineering Brain Cooperation (EBC), which is a study club created on 2010, made me become an active members of the club with my responsibility of helping edit the web pages of the club. Plus, being a captain of a football team of the Industrial and Mechanical Engineering Department in 2010 gave me an opportunity to show my leadership skill to lead the team to the final round of the match.

In conclusion, I would like to attend Master of Science in Electromechanical Engineering at Vrije Universiteit Brussel for many reasons. It would help me develop specialized areas and apply concepts more accurately in that environment. It would also help me to a succeed my future careers and goals in greater professionally. I feel that learning new things and challenges helps to shape a person into who they will become.

Your faithfully,

My name

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Thank you in advanced !