Writing Feedback / TOEFL ESSAY Success is something which is so dear that everyone seeks [5]

Success is something which is so dear that everyone seeks. Success means different things to different people. For some, success is about being successful in your career which is by working in a good company or getting a really good salary, others thinks that success is about being good at school or university and getting good marks. Yet others think that success is about being successful in life.

Of course, everyone seeks success and wants to be successful, but not everyone can be successful. For instance, being successful in a career doesn't mean that this person is successful in his life, because he may be successful in his career but not emotionally. For example, he doesn't know how to communicate with others, and this is a huge problem actually, because no one could be successful without communicating with others.

Honesty, intelligence, confidence and being a good communicator lead to success. Cause less in confidence from my opinion leads to inaction and shyness. In fact, I had a friend in my school and he has a really strong voice actually, an amazing voice but he had a lack in confidence and of course that made him shy but then he had the chance to sing in front of a huge crowed, it was a contest between the schools and he can won that easily but he didn't even participate because he is shy and he was afraid of what people would do and think about him so he missed an opportunity to be successful because he don't have confidence in himself.

To conclude, being successful is not an easy thing and of course not everyone could be but we can try to be successful in our life for sure. And from my point of view, intelligence is the most important characteristic that a person could have to be successful because being an intelligent person could really leads you to be successful in everything not just in your career or school, and being intelligent mean that you can communicate with others and know how to deal with everything. On contrast, just honesty or having a sense of humor wont made you successful.

Writing Feedback / school uniform or giving the student the choice to decide what to wear to school. [2]

Either having a school uniform or giving the students the choice to choose what to wear to school every day is a matter of great differences. In fact there are different points of view concerning this issue. On one hand, some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. On the other hand, there are other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school every day. However, the two points of view are respected because each one has its own reasons.

Concerned high schools who request their students to wear school uniforms, they have their own reasons. First, the students of that high school would be known to everyone that they go to that school (its name). Besides, it will set a standard between the students. In addition, it will save money.

As for those high schools who give's their student's the choice what to wear every day at the school, they also have their reasons. First, the students will not be restricted to costumes or tradition. Added to that, wearing whatever they want would make them feel comfortable and expressing their feelings in something. In addition, some students like to express their social standard.

Last but not least, regardless the differences in the two points of view, both of these rules has its own advantages and disadvantages, but from my opinion, I prefer to go to school while I am wearing whatever I want not to be restricted with one uniform every day