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CarolineMoore   
Dec 4, 2012
Undergraduate / My passion for animals would lead me to become a veterinarian - intended major [2]

"Throughout my life, my family has had a variety of pets from a toucan to a boa constrictor to even an alligator gar. My dad's interest in animals and the fact that I was surrounded by many multiple pets gave rise to this curiosity of one day helping animals. "

"By being becoming a veterinarian, I want to give the opportunity for my patients to live healthy and long lives by giving them the best medical treatments I can give."

Good Luck with your transfer!
CarolineMoore   
Dec 4, 2012
Undergraduate / Why I chose Public Health and Biology - Johns Hopkins SUpplement [2]

"Public health is a major that allows one to understand the diseases that plague humans everyday on this earth and how public health administrators work to confine these illnesses." You don't need "on this earth" it is already implied that humans come from this earth.

"By using my prior knowledge from my Health Science magnet and internship at University of Maryland Medical Center, I will be able to continue supplementing my education at Johns Hopkins. By being a part of this institution, I can learn biostatistics and environmental health. I can also receive training on program planning and health promotion activities to engage patients and community members. " This sentence is short and choppy. I would suggest to either add to it or combine it with another sentence.

Is there more to this essay. It seems like it just ends all of a sudden. Best of luck!
CarolineMoore   
Dec 4, 2012
Essays / Essay on the Holocaust - to support Primo Levi's arguments [3]

Make sure you cite where you get your quotes from. Also you should take out the a in "Although he was a recluse, Hoess would be surrounded by large groups of people throughout his life" changing it to "Although he was reclusive...".

"Levi finds this assertion to be unbelievable in his introduction to Commandant of Auschwitz, declaring that a "concentration camp" was well-known ti (to) the German public and especially among the members of the SS ".

Your essay is very good so far and I am interested in reading the full essay once you finish. Good Luck!
CarolineMoore   
Dec 4, 2012
Undergraduate / The redemption of Sydney Carton in A Tale of Two Cities [2]

Reparation of Sydney Carton
"It is a far, far better thing that I do, than I have ever done; it is a far far better rest that I go to than I have ever known"(Dickens 462). This is the famous last sentence of Charles Dickens A Tale of Two Cities. Sydney Carton sacrificed his life for Charles Darnay in reparation of his "wasted life". In order to save the life of the husband of the woman he loves, Carton took Darnay's place at the dreaded guillotine. Carton redeemed his sinful life in this final sacrifice making him a parallel to Jesus Christ, making his "wasted life" worthwhile, and giving him something to be remembered by.

Sydney Carton was introduced in the novel, when he is helping defend Charles Darnay at his trial. He was much removed and seemed to be not paying attention. Later he is talking to Darnay at a bar and is drunken and self-loathing. He says, "I am a disappointed drudge, sir. I care for no man on earth, and no man on earth cares for me"(Dickens 102). Carton constantly put himself down, and in that same conversation he says that he hated Darnay because he reminds him of what he could have been. The resemblance between the two made him hate Darnay because he hates himself immensely. Carton also is an extremely smart gentleman but he does not take credit for it. He is a "jackal" and not a lion as his colleague Stryver is. He does not work to his full potential and believes he is worthless. Dickens even shows Cartons hatred for himself in the setting when he says, "Sadly, sadly, the sun rose; it rose upon no sadder sight than the man of good abilities and emotions, incapable of their directed exercise, incapable of his own help and his own happiness, sensible of the blight on him, and resigning himself to let it eat him away"(Dickens 111). He is showing how Carton is not happy with himself and won't amount to much.

Carton's renouncement was good because it was redemption for him. Carton was self-hating and would constantly talk about his life being worthless. He believes his life will amount to nothing and he won't be remembered. When talking to Lucy he says "I shall never be better than I am. I shall sink lower, and be worse"(Dickens 184). Carton says this however he does redeem himself. As his replacement of Darnay approaches he stops drinking and is very attentive. Carton stops being selfish and self-loathing and thinks higher of himself. Before he takes Darnay's place in the jail he walks through Saint Antoine and repeats a quote from the bible, "I am the resurrection and the life. "He who believes in me will live, even though he dies" (Dickens 386). Carton believes his sacrifice will make him become a Jesus like figure and that allows him to be more content with himself. He also believes that is once wasted life is now meaningful.

Carton redeemed his life through his sacrificial act. When he was walking after getting chemicals from the apothecary he was walking like " a tired man, who had wandered and struggled and got lost, but who at length struck into his road and saw its end,"(Dickens 384). Even though his life was short lived, Carton was exhausted and ready to die. He was happy to give up his life for the benefit of others. He also told Lucie he would do anything for her so Carton saw his sacrifice as a way to show his love and dedication. Carton wants to be remembered and loved like he thinks Mr. Lorry and Dr. Manette will be. Before Carton is put on the guillotine he reflects on the reason he is doing that. He says that he is doing it for Lucie, the child, Dr. Manette, Darnay and Mr. Lorry. He knows they will weep for him and remember him always. If they do that his life will be worthwhile and he will be happy. Carton believes they will name a son after him and tell the child of his story. His goal in life was to have someone remember him and now many will..

Sydney Carton gave up his life as an act of altruism because he believed his life was wasted. This made his life worthwhile and that acted as redemption for all the things he did in the past such as drinking a lot. The sacrificial act was good for carton and gave him peace at the end of his life.
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