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Dec 22, 2012
Writing Feedback / Ä°ELTS TASK1:children's leisure activities; pie chart illustrations [2]
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I'm not really good at ielts task1 and i'm trying to develop my writing abilitiy
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The pie charts illustrate the results of a questionnaire about boy's and girl's leisure times.Their leisure activities are divided six pies.As we know that we are living in technological age and the pie graph which shows boy's leisure activities indicates that boys are really interested in computer games about %34.In contrast to boys,girls aren't interested in computer games.Especially,girls like dancing and reading to do free time but reading is the lowest level(%2) in boys.Listening to music is the same percentage between two sexes.When it comes to children's sport habits,boys are generally interested in soccer,skateborarding and especially basketball which is about %26.By contrast to boys,girls like doing gymnastics and netball in their free time.both two sexes have different type of habbies doin their free time and boys and girls interestingly have various culture.To give an example boys like harder sports than girls because of upbringing and their culture.As a result,the survey shows that both boys and girls like doing different activities in free time and these activities are separate children's cultures. (170 words)
Hi :)
I'm not really good at ielts task1 and i'm trying to develop my writing abilitiy
Thanks for attention
The pie charts illustrate the results of a questionnaire about boy's and girl's leisure times.Their leisure activities are divided six pies.As we know that we are living in technological age and the pie graph which shows boy's leisure activities indicates that boys are really interested in computer games about %34.In contrast to boys,girls aren't interested in computer games.Especially,girls like dancing and reading to do free time but reading is the lowest level(%2) in boys.Listening to music is the same percentage between two sexes.When it comes to children's sport habits,boys are generally interested in soccer,skateborarding and especially basketball which is about %26.By contrast to boys,girls like doing gymnastics and netball in their free time.both two sexes have different type of habbies doin their free time and boys and girls interestingly have various culture.To give an example boys like harder sports than girls because of upbringing and their culture.As a result,the survey shows that both boys and girls like doing different activities in free time and these activities are separate children's cultures. (170 words)
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