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Posts by greenshoes02
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greenshoes02   
Dec 24, 2012
Undergraduate / 'The longhouse children' - experience shaped me / COSMOS and my brother [5]

I think maybe instead of just stating what you learned, you could describe how you learned it. It's kind of heavy on the stort, and then a little too quick footed where it's supposed to reveal insight. Definitely an interesting topic though!
greenshoes02   
Dec 24, 2012
Undergraduate / Singing and Dancing; Stanford Roommate Supplement [5]

Any feedback and comments are much appreciated! I wasn't quite sure what to write about, do you think this will be okay? Also, I'm 136 characters over the 2000 character limit, so I'm looking to cut down a little. Thanks:)

Stanford's second supplement: Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate - and us - know you better.

I absolutely love to sing. This has never been a huge conflict in the past, but then again, I've never lived with non-family members for extended periods of time. Even at school though, where not many are able to escape the reaches of my vocal chords, nobody has ever forcibly stopped me. [..]
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