Writing Feedback / ( IELTS essay) college degree is less valuable now compared to the past? [14]

Its k. Everytime you ask three questions to the main point you write. Why? What? And how? . The answer for all these questions must be there in the following sentences.

Writing Feedback / ( IELTS essay) college degree is less valuable now compared to the past? [14]

In this age of economic reccession its difficult to get a decent job. Why? How it connects with given question? You can explain this in this way. In these age of economic recession its hard to find a job without excellent qualifications . Infact employers often seek for candidates with higher degrees. People are well aware of this fact and that is why many ttoday are intrested in getting a degree from reputed universities.

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Writing Feedback / ( IELTS essay) college degree is less valuable now compared to the past? [14]

you are failed to give explanation for the points included in the body paragraphs. Also there are so many points in a paragraph. The another thing is the question is regarding the value of university degree compared to past, but your essay is about the benefits of university degree.