rubybuddha
Dec 27, 2012
Undergraduate / Football team/ Chemical Engineering; University of Michigan/ Unique qualities [4]
to me, it seems so generic. they ask what specifically about the school of engineering interests you. maybe talk about the research they have been doing or what specifically about tech day interested you. personally I would leave the first paragraph out and go more in depth about your chosen major and what about it interests you and how those interests can be fulfilled by the school of engineering. and talk about the opportunities the school would provide you, not the people you already know. look up some company partnerships they have and they'll be thoroughly impressed by your effort.
feel free to help with mine! doing the same major as you!
.essayforum.com/undergraduate-essays-2/uva-engineering-supplement-essa y-46401/
to me, it seems so generic. they ask what specifically about the school of engineering interests you. maybe talk about the research they have been doing or what specifically about tech day interested you. personally I would leave the first paragraph out and go more in depth about your chosen major and what about it interests you and how those interests can be fulfilled by the school of engineering. and talk about the opportunities the school would provide you, not the people you already know. look up some company partnerships they have and they'll be thoroughly impressed by your effort.
feel free to help with mine! doing the same major as you!
.essayforum.com/undergraduate-essays-2/uva-engineering-supplement-essa y-46401/