tacutamon
Dec 27, 2012
Undergraduate / Drawing & Painting/ MIT - Pleasure [4]
Millin Gabani
The sketching of pencil, scrubbing of brush, and mingling of colors on a canvas give me intense pleasure; a pleasure that is ubiquitous [ubiquitous already means everywhere, so consider removing everywhere] everywhere and which lingers in each part of my body. Drawing and painting amuses me and it take me to joyous world that I adore. My ideas and thoughts widen after I experience this enchanting (Enchanting sounds more like your entering a magical world, which makes it a better choice for art) journey of art. While drawing or painting I feel myself as an completely different person with a new perspective and (was the previous word meant to be on?) life. This gift of creative art from god is the greatest gift (don't repeat gift. Try something like reward or endowment) that I ever had in my life.
Millin Gabani
The sketching of pencil, scrubbing of brush and mingling of colors on a canvas give me intense pleasure; a pleasure that is ubiquitous everywhere and which lingers in each part of my body. Drawing and painting amuses me and it takes me to joyous world that I adore. My ideas and thoughts widen after I experience this delightful journey of art. While drawing or painting I feel myself as a completely different person with a new perspective and life. This gift of creative art from god is the best gift that I ever had in my life.
The sketching of pencil, scrubbing of brush, and mingling of colors on a canvas give me intense pleasure; a pleasure that is ubiquitous [ubiquitous already means everywhere, so consider removing everywhere] everywhere and which lingers in each part of my body. Drawing and painting amuses me and it take me to joyous world that I adore. My ideas and thoughts widen after I experience this enchanting (Enchanting sounds more like your entering a magical world, which makes it a better choice for art) journey of art. While drawing or painting I feel myself as an completely different person with a new perspective and (was the previous word meant to be on?) life. This gift of creative art from god is the greatest gift (don't repeat gift. Try something like reward or endowment) that I ever had in my life.
