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Dec 28, 2012
Undergraduate / "I am a Cupcake" - Stanford Application "Letter to Your Future Roommate" Essay [3]

Carnegie Mellon Supp Essay --- Please critisize
From a very young age I had a knack for Physics and Mathematics. It stems from the fact that I have always been eager to understand nature. Reading books and watching educational shows like 'The Universe' always brings me closer to understanding the mysteries of nature but never really grasping the facts. If anything, they leave me puzzled with more questions. Great scientists like Albert Einstien, Dr. Abdus Salam, Sir Isaac Newton, and others are my ispiration. I wish to someday become like them, standing at the forefront of research in the fields of Physics and Mathematics.

Carnegie Mellon provides me with a great opportunity to achieve this dream. With its staff of highly qualified and renowned professors and excellent research facilities, Carnegie Mellon would give an experience not achievable anywhere else. Leading researches in the fields of Astrophysics and Quantum Theory, the department of physics is amongst the best in U.S. Thus my choice of Carnegie Mellon.
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