Undergraduate / Feel real/Citizens of the world; Princeton Supplement;Culture/Speech of Woodrow [14]

Both essays are good and extremely well written but I liked the second one better. I thought the second one was better because in the first one you say that you did it because it made you feel real but that almost suggests that your real life is fake and that you spent most of your time stuck in the nicer part of Blue and now you are trying to gain some experience and you are kind of forcing it by making sure that you go downtown at least twice a week.