Yuta
Feb 22, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Thank you so much for your help
Thank you so much for your help
Yuta
Feb 21, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Thank you so much. I just followed your helpful advice. Wish me luck.
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Thank you so much. I just followed your helpful advice. Wish me luck.
P/s: Could you please delete this thread for me? Thank you so much in advance
Yuta
Feb 20, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Hi everyone, here is my revised version. All feedbacks will be appreciated.
Hi everyone, here is my revised version. All feedbacks will be appreciated.
Yuta
Feb 19, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Thank you Mr. Sean and Kevin so much. You've been wonderful.
Thank you Mr. Sean and Kevin so much. You've been wonderful.
Yuta
Feb 18, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Thank you so much. I'll definitely rewrite the essay.
Thank you so much. I'll definitely rewrite the essay.
Yuta
Feb 18, 2009
Undergraduate / How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay. [14]
Hi everyone, I'm applying to Columbia as a transfer applicant for F09. Though I know this one is a huge reach, I just want to give it a shot. (Hey, if you don't try, your percentage of success is zero :D)
Prompt: How and why is your present school not meeting your needs? Please limit yourself to 250 words (1 page).
One important way in which Edmonds Community College is not meeting my needs is that it does not offer fine counseling and resource services. When approaching the academic advisors for help in the college search and transferring process, all I receive is ineffectual suggestions and several Associate degrees' planning worksheets. The global approach of Columbia's commitment appeals to me greatly due to the effective communication from your busy admission officers. When receiving frequent responses regarding transfer admissions from them, it became easy for me to see how strongly you treasure the responsibility of communicating with students compared to other institutions.
With regard to academic aspects, the Economics department at Edmonds does not fully provide students with strengths and distinctive features of the educational program due to limited availability of full-time faculties. Therefore, should I gain admission to Columbia, I would have a chance to unfold my interest regarding this major with 54 current instructors at your department of Economics. Especially, I choose to be a dynamic part of Professor Jeffrey D. Sachs' class, who has been an inspirational leader in his field and placed among 100 most influential leaders in the world by the Time magazine. His research in poverty and debt reduction in poor and developing countries matches my own interests. I look forward to gaining a more specific focus in this field regarding these issues that support my educational pursuit.
In lines with available reasons, I believe being at Columbia will indubitably assure my needs whilst adding valuable experiences to my memory from strong familiarity with the faculty and my fellow students.
*I'm afraid that I'm going off topic. But I don't really have anything to talk about. Edmonds CC is a CC and I have to transfer after graduating. That's all. Could you guys pls give me more feedbacks? Thank you in advance.
Hi everyone, I'm applying to Columbia as a transfer applicant for F09. Though I know this one is a huge reach, I just want to give it a shot. (Hey, if you don't try, your percentage of success is zero :D)
Prompt: How and why is your present school not meeting your needs? Please limit yourself to 250 words (1 page).
One important way in which Edmonds Community College is not meeting my needs is that it does not offer fine counseling and resource services. When approaching the academic advisors for help in the college search and transferring process, all I receive is ineffectual suggestions and several Associate degrees' planning worksheets. The global approach of Columbia's commitment appeals to me greatly due to the effective communication from your busy admission officers. When receiving frequent responses regarding transfer admissions from them, it became easy for me to see how strongly you treasure the responsibility of communicating with students compared to other institutions.
With regard to academic aspects, the Economics department at Edmonds does not fully provide students with strengths and distinctive features of the educational program due to limited availability of full-time faculties. Therefore, should I gain admission to Columbia, I would have a chance to unfold my interest regarding this major with 54 current instructors at your department of Economics. Especially, I choose to be a dynamic part of Professor Jeffrey D. Sachs' class, who has been an inspirational leader in his field and placed among 100 most influential leaders in the world by the Time magazine. His research in poverty and debt reduction in poor and developing countries matches my own interests. I look forward to gaining a more specific focus in this field regarding these issues that support my educational pursuit.
In lines with available reasons, I believe being at Columbia will indubitably assure my needs whilst adding valuable experiences to my memory from strong familiarity with the faculty and my fellow students.
*I'm afraid that I'm going off topic. But I don't really have anything to talk about. Edmonds CC is a CC and I have to transfer after graduating. That's all. Could you guys pls give me more feedbacks? Thank you in advance.