Essays / Future career goals essay for acceptance into high school program [8]

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Essays / Future career goals essay for acceptance into high school program [8]

i also need help with my main body
"At a young age..."
i need a way to add my goals to get to that career please and rearrangements
of sentences and grammar correction .

Essays / Future career goals essay for acceptance into high school program [8]

In the future, I would love to become a pediatrician. Being a pediatrician seems like the perfect match for me because I enjoy working with children and knowing my work can make them better. Also my own pediatric doctor and mother have played an important role in my life and I hope to do the same for other children in the future.

At a young age I didn't have a lot of contemplating about what my career would be. Growing up I always watched my mom at her job and how she worked with her patients and did her best to comfort them in their time of need. Also my pediatrician, Dr. Haile has been my inspiration as well, he has been my doctor ever since I could remember. As a medical practitioner he knows the studies of medicine but as a pediatrician he applies it to children to cure their illnesses. I have always medicine, and understand the goals I must achieve to become a pediatric doctor. I have to major in pre-medicine and take classes such biology, general chemistry, and physics. A pediatrician is a child's physician who provides preventative health maintenance for healthy children and medical care for ill children. However pediatricians also care about your overall well-being, like social stresses, behavioral difficulties, and developmental disorders.

My love for children and seeking for their wellbeing, can be combined into one in this profession. Medicine is a very honorable profession, since it seeks to help those who need it the most. I am looking forward to becoming a pre-med major in college and taking the first step toward becoming a pediatrician.

This is my ROUGH/FIRST DRAFT
i dont like it very much i didnt incorporate my goals and really dont know how to. I want the reader to feel how my passion for this career flows into the love for children and their well being and i also feel i kept repeating myself

i want it to be superb so i can be accepted so i really need help . I would like my introduction to start of with this : My career goals are to attain a career where I can express my love for children and passion for curing and caring for adolescents . To obtain these goals, I must set a plan...